The One I Loved!

Pulse Trace, Healthcare Medicine, Heartbeat
Based on a true story.πŸ’”πŸ’”

I was locked inside my house and just then, got separated from my beloved spouse.
The world says, the relationship is unreal but, how can the nature be so cruel?

It took me away, away from him. Since then, my life has become dim!
The moment I realized, he is losing his consciousness, I ran out of my house just to save him.

I did not know what to do, I kept praying to find a doctor to save his life,
After all, I was his artificial wife.

I left no stone un-turned to look for a medicine for him,
But, all my attempts went in vain. I can’t express, my heart was in deep pain!

Since then, I am living my life without him,
I look normal on the outside but, on the inside my heart screams!

He sometimes visits me in my dreams!

I once in a while, check his heartbeat, to make sure, I haven’t lost him forever,
To lose him at such a crucial time, I’d thought never!

His heart is still beating, though he can’t accompany me in my walks of life,
I miss him a lot, after all, I am his artificial wife.

I do not know, when he’d come back to life!
The thought of losing him is like someone piercing my heart with a knife.

The doctors are unavailable right now and he’s on his bed waiting for things to become fine,
The day he’s back on his feet, with him, I’d dine!

Until then, I would keep missing this beautiful creation,
When he was alive, I’ve never showered him with appreciation.

How selfish are we humans, taking everything for granted,
When he was alright, I have always just ranted.

I now know your worth,
Waiting for your new birth.

Dear Phone, for you I mourn!

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For Penable’s Poetry Competition – β€˜Love’

Competition open to all my readers. Have fun!😊


Poetry that won the competition! Click here for the resultsπŸ‘‰ Competition Results

Edited on Thursday, 27th May 2020 

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121 Comments Add yours

  1. Jay Bleu says:

    I love the imagery and feels very surreal

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  2. Nima Mohan says:

    Just when I was about to burst into tears.. you dropped the bomb!! And now I feel so silly πŸ˜›

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    1. Hahahaha….πŸ˜‚ I was wondering why were you about to cry. I did not see whose and which post it was.

      I felt so bad for you when I read that and then when I saw it was my today’s post, I started laughing.πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

      Hope you liked the twist!πŸ˜¬πŸ˜‚

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      1. Nima Mohan says:

        yes yes.. i liked your post πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

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        1. And the twist?πŸ€£πŸ˜‚

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          1. Nima Mohan says:

            I did.. in fact i used to have the same fears when I had my first phone πŸ˜› and even now.. if it falls down, my heart will skip not one but few beats 😦

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            1. I am living without my phone. This poetry is based on the reality of my life.😒🀣

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              1. Nima Mohan says:

                Ohh !!! Hope so sorry to hear that 😦 hope you get the old one full of life or maybe a new one..your “artificial husband ” πŸ˜›

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                1. Hehehe.. I’m very loyal.πŸ™ˆβ˜ΊοΈ I’d want to fix this but, rn I just can’t since everything is shut. No doctors available to bring him back to life.πŸ˜”

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                  1. Nima Mohan says:

                    Ohh Thats true !!! Tough times 😦 hope you cope with his absence well 😦

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                    1. I’m surviving with a substitute for now.πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ˜‚

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                    2. Nima Mohan says:

                      OOOPPS πŸ˜›

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                    3. Hehehehe πŸ™ˆ

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                    4. Nima Mohan says:

                      πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

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                    5. Well, just want to share this that you look like one of my closest friend. Though your pic isn’t clear, it still reminds me of her. I did share your comment on my blog with my fam and they too said the same thing – You look like her.😊😊

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                    6. Nima Mohan says:

                      Ohh.. that is so sweet ❀ let this be the beginning of another then !!! ❀

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                    7. Yes! Yes!! Yes!!!😊

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                    8. Nima Mohan says:

                      Love to you ❀

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                    9. πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—πŸ˜‡ You’re really reminding me of her.❀️ Btw, are you from Kerela by any chance?😱

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                    10. Nima Mohan says:

                      hahahaha.. !!! Am I from Kerala ?? I am a hard core MALAYALI πŸ˜›

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                    11. Oh boyyy!!! There you go!!😍❀️🀣 She’s from Kerela too.🀣🀣 I got this strong intuition that you are so I asked. See, I was right.😬😬

                      I’d call you NiMoh or no no, what about Moh-Lu?πŸ˜…

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                    12. Nima Mohan says:

                      Please stick with NiMoh or Nima,… I hate being called mohlu πŸ˜›

                      And you are from?

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                    13. Hahaha… Why so?

                      I’m not from Kerela but, she sometimes used to call me by that name. I’m from India too.😊

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                    14. Nima Mohan says:

                      Don’t know.. maybe I have outgrown the age of being called β€œmolu” πŸ˜› Do i look that young in that picture :O

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                    15. Hahaha…. It doesn’t matter what someone’s age is.😊 Don’t feel that way about yourselves. Age doesn’t matter, honestly. You should be young at heart.❀️

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                    16. Nima Mohan says:

                      I am literally someone who preaches that.. I do not care about my age πŸ™‚ and believe me.. am not that old too πŸ˜› πŸ˜› just hate being called molu… that’s all πŸ™‚

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                    17. I got that when you told me in the 1st response. Don’t worry, I’ve got a PhD in keeping nicknames.🀣 I’d come-up with something unique.😬

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                    18. Nima Mohan says:

                      hahaha ok then!!! Find one for me soon.. or you can use Nimoh πŸ™‚ I am pretty much used to that name πŸ˜›

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                    19. Oh, I see. Will look for something else then.😬😬

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                    20. Nima Mohan says:

                      As you wish !!! πŸ™‚

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                    21. Till then, I’d stick with NiMoh.😬

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                    22. Nima Mohan says:

                      Sure Bold Girl !!!! πŸ™‚

                      Now let us say bye… need to hit the bed πŸ™‚ good night.. and had a great time talking to you πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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                    23. Same here, Nimz.😬 Good night.πŸ˜ŠπŸ€—

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                    24. I’ll stick with NiMoh then.😬

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                    25. Nima Mohan says:

                      Yes please ❀

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  3. yash says:

    WELL.. Well.. well!
    Who would know that loss better than me. πŸ˜…
    But until he gets his consciousness back why not to have some extra marital affair?

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    1. Hahahaha.. I don’t really have an option. But, I am managing somehow!😁

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  4. Beautiful poem!

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    1. Thanks, Vishal.😊😊 I did get a lot of notifications from you today.πŸ˜‡ Thanks for the follow as well. Stay around.πŸ€—

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  5. I don’t know why? If this will keep happening i have to leave wordpress and try other platforms where people’s do not have any problem with comments! I am seeing there are some peoples who have some problem with my contents .

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    1. Hey, don’t get disheartened. It happens a lot of us. It has happened with me as well. You can always connect with the customer support team. They’re the best team I’ve ever met. Just speak with them, they’ll help you out.

      Not sure, how long you’ve been here. But, if it’s just recent, hang-on, things will fall in place. I love the people out here.❀️ And so would you.😊

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      1. It is my fourth day on this site.

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        1. Oh congratulations, dear! You’ll love this place. Trust me. I’ve been here for a year now but, just have been active for a month now. I got my 1st follower just last month. I ain’t kidding. You’ll love blogging here.

          You at least interacted on your own. For months, I did not even know or should I say I did not try to find more about this platform and do there were no followers. Whatever I’ve achieved is just in a month’s time.πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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          1. Thanks for sharing your valuable words with me. Well You can see my post if you get a time.

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            1. I surely will. Btw, I was just checking but, your comment dragged me back. Boy, you’re just 4 days old out here and you’ve got more followers than me.😱 That’s crazy!

              I am glad that you’re interacting with other Bloggers. Wish I knew back then. I also wasn’t sure about a lot of things so I was hesitant in connecting.

              I will surely check your content.πŸ‘πŸΌ

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              1. I have explored so many things!. So i came here to interact with peoples .

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                1. Explored other platforms you mean?

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                  1. Read lots of things experience many things on physical level whether its spirituality, yoga, science etc. I am not saying i am a very knowledgeable person but I have been continuously watching my thoughts from 3 years and by doing this i got answers of many questions!

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                    1. That’s interestingly scary!😱 Wow! I’d like to know more.😬

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                    2. I am going to post lot of things in my blog related to these topics. So keep visiting my blog If you are really interested in these stuffs.

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    2. Hey btw, this did not move to spam. See, it’s working.πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

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  6. You got notifications just because i was going through your blog and read lot of posts

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    1. Well, that’s why I thanked you.😊

      P.S – Not sure why your comment is getting moved to the spam box directly.πŸ€” This happened for the 2nd time now.πŸ˜‘

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  7. Harsh says:

    We just can’t live without our phones, can we?
    Loved reading this!

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    1. Hey, I am living without this. This is based on a true story. My story!😭😭😭

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      1. Harsh says:

        Sorry to hear this. But I see a positive here that we can live without it if we try to.

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        1. Hmm… Initially was a little difficult. Now, I am fine.😊

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          1. Harsh says:

            Glad to know you are fine.πŸ™‚

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            1. Hehehehe… Yeah!!!πŸ˜‹

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    2. Btw, thanks.😊 I am happy to know that you loved it. I got so emotional that I forgot to thank you and submitted my comment.πŸ€¦πŸΌβ€β™€οΈπŸ˜

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      1. Harsh says:

        Haha! It happens. It’s okay

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  8. Sidharth says:

    I’d probably be roll over & slip into a coma if anything bad happened to my phone. 🀣 Reading back it all made sense to me, such divine outburst of love could have outpoured only for a mobile rather than a human being. πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

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    1. Bwahaha πŸ˜‚ I’m living life without it since 3 months now. True story it is.πŸ’”

      I’d rather pour all the love in the world on my phone than a human.πŸ˜…

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      1. Sidharth says:

        Why not order a new one then? Doesn’t Amazon deliver stuff to your home or something or are you saving money for something else? πŸ™„

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        1. πŸ™„πŸ™„ You buy it then πŸ™„πŸ˜

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          1. Sidharth says:

            Lol honestly speaking, I’m not that kind and charitible… So ignore my questions. πŸ˜… Hope things get resolved soon at your end. πŸ™

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            1. Hahaha..🀣🀣 Why did your comment get moved to spamπŸ˜‚ I just saw it now.

              Well, I didn’t literally mean that.πŸ˜‚πŸ™„ Well, I have a substitute for now. So no issues. Will check these later on.😊

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              1. Sidharth says:

                Cool which ones are you exploring?

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                1. Ahhh… Hehehe… Just a tiny office phone I managed to pick just last week. Before that life was a little difficult.

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                  1. Sidharth says:

                    No I meant are you exploring any new mobile phone models, as your potential lover in the future? 🀭

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                    1. Hahaha… I initially thought so but, then at the very last moment I thought it was this.πŸ˜…

                      No, nothing actually. My plans never work. It turns out to be disastrous and moreover, I just keep planning and never get it done. So after a lot of observations on my own life, I’ve stopped planning.😬

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            2. The way you ended the message.πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚

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              1. Sidharth says:

                Yea damaging a phone is more heart breaking than a break up, at least for meπŸ™ˆ. So that’s why hope everything gets resolved at your end soon. πŸ˜…πŸ€£πŸ˜‚

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                1. Hehehe… Good that it’s the phone that hurts you more and not humans.πŸ˜…

                  I have made some adjustments for now. Though I miss clicking pictures but, that’s okay.πŸ˜”

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        2. Btw, I nominate you for the Ideal Inspiration Blogger Award. Do participate.😊😬

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          1. Sidharth says:

            Thanks, I’ll surely participate in it. I’ll post it later half of the next month if that’s alright. June, promises to be an emotionally instable month for me so let’s how it goes. πŸ˜…

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            1. Yeah sure, np. I’ll share the link. Why is June unstable?πŸ˜³πŸ€”

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              1. Sidharth says:

                I don’t like to talk about it as yet, I prefer to wait until I weave a rhyme around it. Let that be a surprise that shall unfurl on the 17th June… So stay tuned I guess. πŸ˜…

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                1. I have guessed it already. And I’m sure it’s correct or probably I’d be very close to it.😬

                  All the very best and congratulations in advance!πŸ‘πŸΌ Nail it!!!

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              1. Sidharth says:

                Thank you for the nomination. πŸ™

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                1. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

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  9. kimmagic says:

    πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
    I loved the twist at the end!! Took me by surprise!!

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    1. Hehehehe… That’s my real story.πŸ˜”πŸ˜”

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      1. kimmagic says:

        πŸ˜†Don’t feel bad, it’s my story too πŸ˜‚

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        1. What?😲 Then how are you managing? You bought a new one or managing with a substitute?

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          1. kimmagic says:

            Are you asking about my phone?? Iwas referring to it in the past tense. πŸ˜… I’ve had 3 different phones till now!! The older 2 broke down and I’m still going strong with the 3rd!! Hope it stays!! πŸ˜†

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            1. kimmagic says:

              I hope u r allright tho!!

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              1. Hahahah… I am but, not my beloved.

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                1. kimmagic says:

                  Oh no!! I hope your loved one is repaired soon or replaced soon!!

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                  1. Hmmm… Please do pray that I get this fixed and keep myself safe too while I step-out.

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                    1. kimmagic says:

                      I will pray that u stay safe for sure!! Take care πŸ’•

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                    2. πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ€—πŸ€—

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            2. Hehee… Oh! My situation is real-time.πŸ˜…

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              1. kimmagic says:

                Oh I know how hard it gets without our beloved!! 😬

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  10. akshita1776 says:

    I was becoming sad and sadder as I was moving forward and the imagery tucked at my heartstrings. And then you just dropped that bomb and I was like, “WhatπŸ˜‚”. Really loved it🀩

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    1. Hahahaha… Loved the suspense?🀣🀣

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      1. akshita1776 says:

        Yes I did🀩

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        1. LMAO! That makes me just realise.. just yesterday Era named me ‘Suspense Queen’πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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            1. Hehehe.. Thanks!

              I’d told Era, “As long as there is a Queen linked with the names they keep for me, I should be fine with it.”🀣🀣

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              1. akshita1776 says:

                πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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                1. 🀣🀣😜😜

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  11. Like!! I blog frequently and I really thank you for your content. The article has truly peaked my interest.

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  12. Rishika Jain says:

    Blehhh🀣🀣
    My condolences to your dead phone 🀣😜

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    1. 😒😒😒

      You read this now?πŸ™„πŸ€”

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      1. Rishika Jain says:

        Yess!
        I am gonna read all your old posts, slowly..

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        1. Hehehe… Okay!

          How come all of a sudden?πŸ€”πŸ€” Free time?πŸ˜„

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          1. Rishika Jain says:

            Not really..But I can take out time for them😁

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            1. Them? The posts? Right?

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              1. Rishika Jain says:

                And for you too, of course❀😁

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                1. Hahaha…. Smart huh! Before I could again ask you, “Just the posts?”πŸ˜‚

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                  1. Rishika Jain says:

                    🀣🀣😎
                    No but I mean it!

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                    1. Hehee… I know.πŸ€—

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                    2. Rishika Jain says:

                      πŸ€—β€

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                1. Hmmm… Okayyyyy

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  13. Haha… You got me in the first half… πŸ˜‚ Nice poem…! The Rhyming and the message are just right..! This is the first time I’ve seen someone mourn for a phone. That too through a poem..! Anyways, may you get a brand new iPhone 11 ProMax… RIP old phone…

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    1. Hehhe… That was the whole intention.😜 Well, thank you!😬

      Ummm… I don’t like πŸ‘οΈ phone but, I hope your wishes for me comes true and I get an upgrade.πŸ˜…

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  14. I got it into my life , we fell in love , it caged me…

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